A |
intriguing & relevant opener
thesis is clear, concise & decisive
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conclusion restates or paraphrases thesis
conclusion briefly goes through the body of evidence |
evidence is provided in a rational chronology
connections between evidence and thesis are explicit
connections between paragraphs
topic sentences are clear & concise
one topic per paragraph |
quotes are properly integrated and cited
examples are relevant and properly explained
sufficient analysis
concepts are appropriately used and relevant
sufficient evidence is supplied and cited to back up claims |
few grammatical & spelling errors not caught by spell check
interesting & appropriate word choice
appropriate page length
adheres to MLA format
contains a proper works cited page
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B |
uninteresting but relevant opener
thesis is fairly clear but may not be decisive or concise
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conclusion vaguely restates thesis
conclusion does not adequately go through the body of evidence |
evidence is provided in a fairly rational manner, however, it could be adjusted
connections are not always explicitly present
connections between paragraphs are not always evident
topic sentences are not always clear
paragraphs may occasionally contain multiple topics |
quotes may on occasion be awkwardly placed or not appropriately explained/integrated
relevance of examples may not be evident or properly explained
gaps within analysis may occasionally occur
concepts are not always integrated properly or not explicitly connected to thesis
insufficient evidence or not cited |
minimum grammatical & spelling errors not caught by spell check
occasional inappropriate word choices
appropriate page length
adheres to MLA format
contains a proper works cited page |
C |
weak opener
unclear thesis & may not be decisive or concise
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conclusion does not restate thesis
conclusion does not go through body of evidence, or introduces new evidence |
evidence is provided with little to no clear rationale
connections between evidence and thesis are not explicit
topic sentences are not clear
paragraphs regularly contain multiple topics |
inappropriate quotes or misplacement (or too few)
irrelevant or excessive examples without explanations (or too few)
light analysis
irrelevant concepts without explanation (or concepts are conspicuously absent)
claims are often not backed up with evidence or not cited |
serious grammatical & spelling errors (including ones that would have been caught by spell check if used)
often contains inappropriate word choices
page length is shorter than requested
minimal MLA format errors
problems with works cited page |
D
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F |
no opener
unclear thesis & indecisive or wordy
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conclusion lacks relevance to thesis
conclusion does not refer to evidence or introduces new evidence |
illogical chronology
lacks connections between evidence and thesis
lacks connections between paragraphs
topic sentences are not clear
paragraphs contain multiple topics |
lacks appropriate quotes (or excessive quotes)
lacks relevant examples
little analysis
lacks content-specific terms and concepts
claims are not backed up with evidence or cited |
serious grammatical & spelling errors (spell check was not used)
inappropriate word choice throughout paper
MLA format was not adhered to
serious problems with or no works cited page |